I started writing a segment about the relationship between feminism, punk and the music industry as a whole. I feel that this is a niche topic that ties in extremely well with the documentary, and will provide extra intellectual content for the audience.
Uploaded a new version of my documentary to the blog.
Added more photographs to my slideshow to anchor the 'three artists' message.
Changed the wording of my descriptions slightly to put across the fact that this is a reflexive documentary, and the artists tell their own stories instead of a journalist narrator.